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Thanx!   lovely work - but I do agree with =Mithgariel-stock - it's difficult to create shadows - I have spent hours trying to get them right on my own works - trial and error is great practice
 Regardless - this is beautiful. :favlove:! -- Always remember you're unique, just like everyone else. whoops
 there we go lol!-- Always remember you're unique, just like everyone else. lol Yeah, man, shadows are the bane of my existence right now. I figure I just gotta keep at them and I'll eventually get it down.
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 -- "We can spend our lives letting the world tell us who we are... Letting our past decide our future. Or we can decide for ourselves. And maybe it's our job to invent something better."  Nice, the only thing I would recommend is making her arms darker since the light is behind her, and also shadows around the skirt
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However, there is one error that can easily be corrected. There are little to no shadows around her, so she seems very out of place and floating in mid-air. Also, the beams of light seem to be behind her, or go through her, not over her.
The same goes for the flowers, naturally.
I am not much of an expert in light and shadows, been messing with them as well, so I suggest you seek some more professional advice than mine, to make this promising picture truly beautiful.
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